Stop touching me!
December 19, 2010
This week’s prompt at One Single Impression is ‘Stillness’.
backed in a corner
nothing protects from crisis
freeze reality
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There once was a poet named Brian
who roared as loud as a lion
he lived in central Florida
with cats and a wife
and always found time for lying
Writers always lie, or at least create a truth meaningful only to them. My name is Brian, I'm 48, I do live in Florida and am very happily married. I consider myself a poet rather than an writer, my coffee table blog is called "My Muse, My Poetry, My Life" while my main blog is titled "Truth Is Freedom". I am also self-published author of "Real Magic", available online through Amazon and have several unfinished drafts floating around for other books. On occasion I write spanking and discipline fiction but mainly I post poetry and short fiction at my blog. My readers tell me I have a gift for bringing characters to life. It has more to do with being a multiple personality. Internal dialog is quite normal for us.
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If you read the pages at the top of my blog you will discover that I have multiple others living in me. Rose Dewy Knickers has two blogs of her own although she rarely posts now.
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Ah, only if it could be done..you will find most parts of earth frozen.. liked your take on prompt..
Yes that is the feeling of stillness, a harsh cold chilling kind Brian.
Good take on the prompt word.
Have a great start to the new week!!
you said it!!!!
hot chocolate I have
warm cuddles I need
I like the way you implied the prompt.
powerful…
like it very much!
Well done.
“Stillness” prompted the same kind of thought for me. I know that which you have described.
Lovely – you capture the moment of a crisis really well – it reminds me of a sharp intake of breath
you are right in this. great thoughts! mine is here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/23/painted-hallways/
If only we could freeze reality…and change things!
Clever haiku, I liked it.
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/12/20/one-second/
another brilliant poem! wow!
Glad to have you..
A++
enjoy some fun!
One of the worse feelings in the world.
I can feel this.
brilliant capture of the intensity of feeling….
The title adds a whole new dimension to the poem. I enjoy it so much when someone can say a lot in few words.
My potluck: http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/12/20/sacrament/
Powerful.. Intense Feelings..
–Someone is Special–
Nice haiku..
very well written
Its been long.. Wish you a great new year ahead, and I hope to read more of your work this year!
A wonderful depiction of a dark picture with deep intonations through your expert use of words. Haiku, of the highest level!