Hunting in the jungle
This week for Read~Write~Poem the prompt is ‘Smell’. I went back and forth on what to write but decided to stay with my first impulse.
“Mating rituals”
the waning moon dodged the scudding wrack of clouds blown apart by winds howling over the jagged peaks looming high over the buildings slowly turning dark floor by floor
harsh chemicals could not mask the scent
she growled in her chest gone tight and stood on legs fluid with need and anticipation for the chase so long in coming through the dark streets empty of all but her targeted prey
moldy leftovers whiffed in disgust
he dropped from suddenly nerveless fingers and shivered when open night window allowed hint of fate amongst garbage and stale death in alleyways strewn with empty hopes
plumes of exhaust wavered from drains
on the move she loped across the silent city the few spotting knew of her quest and gave way knowing it was not their turn this time but wishing soon to smell the mate for them
sweating fear left a clear trace
despite countless warnings the actuality of flight was driven by sheer instinct as hormones reacted to the ever closing female determined to subdue the chosen male in heat
cool damp fog and sharp pine
shedding clothes the waning moon showed glistening breasts and shining thighs pumping in ancient rhythm reaching out to desperate flight and pouncing on rigid form
sunrise and satiated mix of tangy fluids
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After reading this I have visions in my mind of garbage, dirty alley ways and things unclean. These are not usually images that come to mind when I think “sex”.
There was a rawness to this. It certainly pulled me in.
I loved your juxtaposition with storytelling and your description of odors. Well crafted and vivid. I have to echo Anthony’ comment about its raw quality, too.
-Nicole
This is incredible. I like the highs and lows.
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excellent write brian… a workout for both the imagination and the senses……
vampires? werewolves?
Good afternoon everyone, I think I got caught up to all the comments over the weekend.
This poem here I wrote because my first thought of smell was how we react and are attracted by scent. As to the species in the poem, I’ll leave that up to you dear readers.
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Brian, thank you, for your continuing support! Now, that aside, grin, I started to read this and stopped, afraid of where you took it, my eyes went down a bit on the page, and I said, oh, good, just sex. Glad I read the whole thing!
the hunt…very exciting!
jorc
empty garden
Thanks everyone for all the comments.
maybe this wonderful piece of writing have been saved
for your Friday prompt of “what’s on your mind?”
it’s certainly on mind now you rotten so and so
Ann….. you just wait my pretty.
I like the long lines interspersed with the shorter ones (almost has the rhythm of sex as well as the smells, doesn’t it?), the lack of punctuation – gives it a dreamy, desperate quality
i love the structure of this poem too, really makes the images stand out almost in relief