When things that go bump in the night…
“For this week’s
prompt, write a poem in which something or things represents some other thing or things. You could use an object to symbolize an idea. Or a taste to represent a feeling. Or a color to stand in for an animal.
You can let the poem make clear what’s being represented. Or not. Invite your readers to use their imaginations.”
“My shoulder hurts”
but I keep this cudgel handy, it’s changed
through the years,
the cudgel… at first
when young, it was
a mere
twig
a sprig, a prig I was, but
so what… because by
teenage angst it was
a stick, a brick, a
prick I was, but
who cares… by early
adulthood it was a
a plank, a prank,
swank I was, but
big deal… I was on top
and thanks to my
foresight
wisdom
all around superiority, I had
the biggest set of wood by
the time I was middle-aged, no
longer small, my mighty
cudgel smote all
who defied
and
cried
and gave
lame excuses
for
performance as
I beat them
down with
my mighty
cudgel
I sleep well at night
with it
on my shoulder but
get real,
looking
in the mirror
is so overrated
me and my
ego
do just
fine…
when things go bump in the night
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I love it! You seriously come up with this stuff on your own? I’m amazed at your talent once again.
I’d laugh, but it’s too real to be funny.
Inflation at an all time high!
((((Kila))))
Yes my fevered mind strikes again, and I can’t blame Rose for this one.
Quill, believe me it’s based on real life, and not mine in anyway.
Welcome Stan. Not true anywhere. Hyperflation in many countries has been much greater. Thanks for the visit.
I just loved this. And so very true for many of us.
You mean so true that others are like this Anthony. Right?
you never fail to amaze me with the diversity of your talent and I’m not just saying that ‘cos I lurv ya
it sounds like a lot more wood than is needed for a chip on the shoulder
I’m still at work (yawn yawn) and for once I have half-an-hour left of the day with nothing to do and the bossman gone… that’s why I’m here
hope your day’s not as yawn yawn as mine
lotsa luv ann xxxxxx
(((((Annie)))))
I lurv you too. Sorry you’re bored, I can think of nothing I like more than working.
Very busy this past week and a bit today at work which is good for the paycheck.
I must be an honest poet here though and confess the ‘chip on the shoulder’ never crossed my mind.
home at last… and it’s a cold miserable wet day
here. guess our summer has been and gone
the chip on the shoulder was the first thing that
crossed my mind when I saw wood and shoulder, but
your poem really reflects quite the reverse; your
mighty cudgel and huge ego gives others chips on
their shoulders
think I’ll shut up now!
Excellent Brian – something we can all relate to.
(((((Ann)))))
My mighty ego? Actually the vision I had when writing the poem was a troll with a huge and knobby cudgel slung over a shoulder. I don’t cudgel people at all. Wheedle and beg maybe.
Summer is over????? Come back to Florida. That will heat you right up. sizzzzzzle
Hi Texas, I was just at your blog leaving a comment.
Thank you.
when I used the words “your mighty cudgel and huge ego” I was referring to the “my” of the poem, not about you personally, so there
I wish being back in Florida was as easy as beaming up or wriggling my nose… do you think my fat would melt in the heat?
And here I thought you complimenting me.
Probably… but since you’re not fat, I wouldn’t know.
Excellent poem
all those internal rhymes made this a pleasure to read aloud
there is something quite attractive about just s smidgen of egotism…. very clever
Quite clever, Brian, as usual. Glad you are writing.
Welcome Ofira and thank you.
Hi Sister, I always read my poems out loud before publishing to make sure they flow.
Paisley, just a pinch please.
Marcia, writing here and there.
I was bumped, my friend!
Careful you don’t trip over your cudgel Gautami.