Seed Porn

2008 February 19
by Brian

Cafe Writing February prompts about love of gardens. Anyone who gets catalogs in the mail will understand the title of this post and the poem I wrote.

Option Five: Poetry

From December to March, there are for many of
us three gardens:
the garden outdoors,
the garden of pots and bowls in the house,
and the garden of the mind’s eye.

- Katherine S. White

Using the quotation above as your inspiration, write a poem (any form is fine) about gardens.

“Dirty Hands”

the pallid drifts cover my garden, the Full
Snow Moon and
rainbow crystals, the
deep longing for
green

wait for restless children to sleep, the Full
Snow Moon and
glossy pages, the
deep longing for
green

trembling hand caresses pictures, the Full
Snow Moon and
packet seeds, the
deep longing for
green

racing heart sees exotic forms, the Full
Snow Moon and
blooming bush, the
deep longing for
green

exhilaration in correct zone, the Full
Snow Moon and
furtive call, the
deep longing for
green

impatiently wait special delivery, the Full
Snow Moon and
fragrant hope, the
deep longing for
green

dripping ice lengthening sun, the Full
Worm Moon and
robins call, the
deep longing for
green

working soil tender treasure, the Full
Pink Moon and
dirty hands, the
deep longing for
green

19 Responses leave one →
  1. 2008 February 19

    Morning Paisley. No it’s no specific form, I just wrote it that way. Living in Florida it’s green year round and you can buy flowers and plants anytime at the garden centers. However, my memories are of deep snow and spring fever. The many catalogs in the mail that promise a lush garden for everyone.

  2. 2008 February 19

    brian,, this is entrancing.. is this a specific form,, or did you just write it in such a way that i feel like it should be a recognized for,… i am sooo not a good gardener… i tried with veggies last year from the first time,, since i have always said i wanted to have a garden at least once in my life… well i have had one… and huh uh no… it isn’t for me… maybe i ought to try flowers…..hmmmmm…..

  3. 2008 February 19

    great flowing words Brian!

    “the
    deep longing for
    green”

    I know all too well. I cannot grow a garden successfully. I can do houseplants but Im not much good at the great outdoor plants…what gives?!?!

  4. 2008 February 19

    Aniin BG. It takes so much effort to grow a garden. We are fooled by the ease that weeds grow.

    I’ll be thinking about Wee One.

  5. 2008 February 19

    The whole time I lived in Vegas I had a deep longing for green. Nicely done, Brian.

  6. 2008 February 19
    DaBich permalink

    OoOOhh…I love this! Sooo…intense…yet soothing, all at once…

  7. 2008 February 19

    Wonderful, Brian. :)

    While snow is falling here, I’m dreaming of getting outside and digging around in the garden. The seed catalogs are just beginning to arrive.

  8. 2008 February 19

    Afternoon. For some reason WP is very slow for me today.

    Quill, that’s no a problem where you live now. :)

    (((((((((((DB)))))))))

    You’re dreaming of green… I know you are. ;)

    Robin, those catalogs are wicked, wicked I tell you!

  9. 2008 February 19

    OH! This is perfect. We’re just about to start planting so this goes right along with how I feel. Very beautiful.

  10. 2008 February 19

    ((((((Pinky)))))))

    You are feeling so good right now. Happy thoughts back at ya.

  11. 2008 February 20

    I like the structure to this and hjow you use repitition to give us a flavour of the obsession….

  12. 2008 February 20

    Excellent, as always. Soon be gardening myself. Hopefully I’ll be able to keep on top of it this year.
    I usually fail, sadly.

  13. 2008 February 20

    Thank you Crafty, I thought the repetition would distract, but it makes the poem stronger.

    Anthony, you are too kind. I fail too, only because I have no time to spare.

  14. 2008 February 21

    Happy Thurssy Brian!! one day closer to the weekend :) Have a great day.

  15. 2008 February 21

    oops cant spell or type today. eh, who cares..

  16. 2008 February 21

    Yure welcum BG :P

  17. 2008 February 22

    ‘the deep longing for green’..my heart longs with an ice storm outside!!

  18. 2008 February 22

    UL, there has been more ice this year than I ever remember. Stay warm and safe.

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