Love In A Re-fri-ger-a-tor

2008 February 8
by Brian

Sunday Scribblings has a strange prompt this week, “Fridge Space”. When combined with Cafe Writing and the list of February prompts about love, it yields an interesting story.

Option Six(Cafe Writing): Fiction

You have to walk carefully in the beginning of love; the running across fields into your lover’s arms can only come later when you’re sure they won’t laugh if you trip.
~Jonathan Carroll, Outside the Dog Museum
Write a short story, scene, or piece of flash-fiction about the beginning of love.

“Gourmet Love”

There was something strange about her, glimpsed in brief flashes. Her smell, ripe and sharp, clashed with sweet and tart. Not the usual fare sampled here, she was an exotic, pampered and wrapped. All that day he saw her and yearned to get closer. Others came and went but he was waiting for his big chance.

The next night, it happened. A space was created and he found himself placed right next to his obsession. He was so close he could almost touch her, but he strained to no avail. She was turned away, facing the door and ignored his silent entreaties. He felt crushed, unrequited love seemed to be his fate.

Muffled music, bright laughter, the refrigerator opened wide. Many hands reached in and pulled out bottles and containers, then her. She was gone, he was left behind. Darkness covered him. Sudden vertigo, a strange place, high on a cliff, but there she was, revealed at last in her naked glory. Firm and plump, yet sleek and shiny, he fairly burst with anticipation when laid down next to her.

Even when the cold steel knives sliced into his body, he reveled when she in turn was cut into blocks and then speared. Yes, he cried, when he felt his slices envelope her cubed forms and be in turn skewered. Lifted towards an open mouth, he felt the sharp snap of teeth and then, blissful oblivion.

“Mmmmmm. This is sooooo good! Goat cheese wrapped in salmon! I love this!”

33 Responses leave one →
  1. 2008 February 8

    I may have a Writers Island post later with the prompt “Changed”.

    Have a great weekend everyone.

    The title to this post is of course a spoof of the Aerosmith song, “Love in an elevator”

  2. 2008 February 8

    Nicely done, Brian. You started my day with a smile.

  3. 2008 February 8

    Ah, L O L!!!! Love it! ;)

    Smoked salmon can make LIVER taste good! Goat cheese is wonderful in and of itself. Quite the tasty combo, coming from a veggie! LOL :P

    Love the drama and longing.

    OXOX D :)

  4. 2008 February 8

    What an macabre ending! I love such twisted ones!

    Today I got here from Michele. But you know I would have done that anyway.

    I posted for changed. Fridge Space comes later. Can’t think of any!

  5. 2008 February 8

    Very creative!

  6. 2008 February 8

    Hi Quill. Then I’ve done my job. :D

    (((((((Diane)))))

    Who knew what went on behind closed doors. :P

    Gautami, I never would have guessed that about you. ;)

    Thank you Literary, is your name a vocation?

  7. 2008 February 8

    That was a delicious story. Who knew that two lovers would meat like this.

    Michele sent me.

  8. 2008 February 8

    Cute!
    Now what is a hummingbunny?
    By the way, Michele sent me. :)

  9. 2008 February 8

    I knew it was going to be some kind of cheese! I was picturing something French though – all runny and sensual.

  10. 2008 February 8

    I’ve been a bit laggardly in following Sunday Scribblings and the other prompts lately, but I enjoyed this one. Michele sent me.

  11. 2008 February 8

    Thanks everyone from Michelle’s for stopping by today. I normally take the weekend off from blogging, but I may check in once in awhile.

    Welcome Jon, like I said, the mysterious lives of fridge foods.

    Welcome Chana, a hummingbunny? That is a strange tail.

    Mais oui Robin, I am a French goat, so you are correct… at least on the sensual side. ;)

    Hi Catherine, good to see you again. Thanks. :D

  12. 2008 February 8

    quite the scrumptious little story Brian about the love of my life…

    … food

    ::said rubbing fat tummy and licking lips::

  13. 2008 February 8

    Brian this was a delightful and sensual take on a very unusual prompt. Bravo! XXOO

    Thank you for all your support!!!

    HUGS

  14. 2008 February 8

    Hi Brian,
    I suspected something fishy. A delicious tale :-)

  15. 2008 February 9

    I like smoked salmon (guess it’s the redmans blood in me) and I also like goat cheese. Wee One can eat it w/ out any allergies…we call it ’squeaky cheese’ because it squeaks. Never tried those 2 together though!

    lol, I enjoyed this!

    Happy Saturday my friend. ((hugs))

  16. 2008 February 9

    Hey Brian. Just popped over to say hello and to see what creativeness is happening here today.
    (Barngoddess: I tried to smoke salmon but I can’t get it wrapped up in theose little papers to light it.)
    Just kidding. I smoke it without the papers.

  17. 2008 February 10

    I was trying to work out what combination we were working towards, but didn’t figure it out. Love goat’s cheese. If that was smoked salmon, though, I’m afraid I’d say no thanks. Great take on the prompt.

  18. 2008 February 10

    Brian,
    Read this Friday at work, but couldn’t make the commenty thing work. Anyway, thought this piece quite clever and very Brianish in an imaginative way.
    Nice job bud!
    rel

  19. 2008 February 10

    Interesting . . . very interesting

  20. 2008 February 11

    Good Monday morning everyone, thanks for swinging by over the weekend. So did lots of spammers, as you can see to the left, I’m now over 50,000 spam comments. :)

    (((((((Ann)))))))

    Have a safe trip and we pray that she makes a full recovery.

    (((((Tammy)))))

    Thanks for lovely comment and enthusiastic endorsement. ;)

    Anthony, your keen sense of smell sniffed out the hook.

    Aniin BG, I had a decent weekend all things considered. No salmon or cheese though.

    Hi Swampy, thanks for flying by in the cloud of smoke.

    Welcome back Imelda, I think it was fresh salmon. ;)

    Rel, I guess I now have a reputation for strange poetry. :)

    Thank you Cricket.

  21. 2008 February 11

    I was practically drooling. Fabulous twisted ending! I mean, I’ve already forgotten about the title until I got to the very end, and I was like “Duh! Of course!!”

  22. 2008 February 11

    Hi Lotus, sorry about the drool, I’ll provide a napkin next time. :)

  23. 2008 February 11

    Wow! Who’da thought all of that was going on in the fridge? lol Love your twist on the fridge space theme! ;o)

  24. 2008 February 11

    Wow! Some creativity cookin’ here! Love it!

  25. 2008 February 11

    Hi Heather, good thing I exposed all the happenings.

    Thank you Tumble, a wild party.

  26. 2008 February 11

    brian!!!! that was terrific!!!!

  27. 2008 February 12

    Thanks Paisley!!!!!!!! :D

  28. 2008 February 12

    They’ve said it all, now my turn, hurray! As always ’superb’…couldnt find another original :)

  29. 2008 February 12

    UL, superb is good… with a nice dipping sauce.

  30. 2008 February 14

    yuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmm is love…

  31. 2008 February 15

    Don’t forget the napkin Piece. :)

  32. 2008 February 17

    Gourmet love was beautiful. It really was a delicious treat! Thank you.

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